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                  <forename>Hablot Knight</forename>
                  <surname>Browne</surname>
                  <name type="displayName">Browne, Hablot Knight (pseudonym <q>Phiz</q>)</name>
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                  <surname> Kendrick </surname>
                  <forename> James </forename>
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            <pubPlace>Victoria, BC, Canada</pubPlace>
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            <note>Poem signed <q>W. Thornbury.</q> (AC)</note>
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               <title level="j">Once a Week</title>
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                     <incipit>Sitting underneath a tree</incipit>
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                  contain the following scenes. At the far left, a knight on horseback raises his sword in the air while another knight reaches toward
                  him. Below them, a man lies on the ground, crouched over two books. In the centre, a man wraps his hands around another man’s neck.
                  The afflicted man drops small bags and coins. On the right, a woman drops a bouquet of flowers as she looks back toward a man who
                  gestures towards her. Below these figures, two boys fight. One boy pulls back his hand as if to punch the other boy. The second boy
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               <l>While in every cloud I blow</l>
               <l>Float my <rhyme type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine" label="b">fairy vassals</rhyme>,</l>
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               <l>Circling in the <rhyme label="c" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">vapour</rhyme>,</l>
               <l><seg ana="dvpp:sdAnaphora">Like the</seg> midges o’er a <rhyme label="d" type="dvpp:rhymeMasculine">pool</rhyme>,</l>
               <l><seg ana="dvpp:sdAnaphora">Like the</seg> boys released from <rhyme label="d" type="dvpp:rhymeMasculine">school</rhyme>,</l>
               <l>Or moths around a <rhyme label="c" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">taper</rhyme>.</l>
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               <l>Let me preach in playful tone</l>
               <l>With the due in<rhyme label="e" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">flation</rhyme> ;</l>
               <l>Pointing morals, sure as fate,</l>
               <l>To my congre<rhyme label="e" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">gation</rhyme>.</l>
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               <l style="margin-left: -0.8em;">" See this slender rod of <rhyme label="f" type="dvpp:rhymeMasculine">clay</rhyme>,</l>
               <l>White and frail and <rhyme label="g" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">little</rhyme>,</l>
               <l>Type of poor mortality,</l>
               <l>(That Death snaps in cruel <rhyme label="f" type="dvpp:rhymeMasculine">play</rhyme>,)</l>
               <l>Life is no less <rhyme label="g" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine">brittle</rhyme>.”</l>
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               <l>Thin and sharp and winding blue</l>
               <l>Rise the clouds a<rhyme type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine" label="h">bove one</rhyme>,</l>
               <l>Lingering o’er the preacher’s head</l>
               <l>(How can such things <rhyme type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine" label="h">love one</rhyme> ?)</l>
               <l>Half contemptuously I roll</l>
               <l>Up my sermon <rhyme label="c" type="dvpp:rhymeFeminine dvpp:rhymeCrossStanza">paper</rhyme>,</l>
               <l style="margin-left: -0.66em;">“ Riches, beauty, glory—<rhyme label="j" type="dvpp:rhymeMasculine">all</rhyme>”</l>
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